conflict- First Draft opening scene

This is our first draft opening sequence overall we recieved posative feedback but feel we could make improvements in varying our shot types, ensuring the narrative is easy to follow and understand, the light effects were said to too bright and so as director of the production I will help try to re-film and direct another set of initial shopts to ensure there are enough varied shot types and that the narrative is easy to understand. And ryan as the editor will redo the credits making the font and colour perfectly match the tone, change the light effect to reflect the dark atmosphere which should improve our opening tenfoild.